Supporting sentences describe, explain, clarify, or give examples of the main idea in the topic sentence. They answer questions such as Who? What? When? Where? Why? and How? They explain the topic sentence in greater detail and give the reader more information. Continue reading
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Titles vs. Topic Sentences
A topic sentence must have a topic + a claim about the topic. This almost always means a SUBJECT (noun or noun phrase) plus a VERB (or verb phrase). If it lacks a verb or verb phrase, it might be a good title, but certainly will not be a good topic sentence, or even a full sentence! (Remember S + V?) Continue reading
GW Photo Assignment: Wake Up Your Eyes!
Watch this video:
Then, prepare a slide show of ten photos to illustrate each of the following principles: Continue reading
Paragraphs #1: Topic Sentences
Summer in Kochi can be both terrible and wonderful. It can feel like Hell to visitors who are not prepared for how hot and humid it can be. But summer is also the season where Kochi is the most beautiful and full of life. If you know how to dress, where to go, and how to keep yourself cool, summer in Kochi can be Paradise.
A paragraph is a collection of sentences that describe, discuss, or explain one central idea. The three main parts of a paragraph are:
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Course Outline
Senmon English II (専門英語II)
Students will gain experience in, and develop skills and strategies for, presenting in English in various situations and formats. We will start with practicing telling an interesting personal story in an informal setting, and move to more formal presentations.
Continue readingFeature Articles: The 4 boxes
News articles (in mainstream journalism) are usually one of two main types: “straight news” or “feature articles.” Here we’ll look at a common rhetorical structure that feature articles use. This is sometimes called “The Wall Street Journal” style.
Pro / Con: A Debate about Nuclear Energy
People living in Japan have a long and painful history with nuclear fission. Watch this TED debate and answer the following four questions:
- What were the pro arguments for nuclear energy in the debate?
- What were the con arguments against nuclear energy in the debate?
- In your opinion, which side won the debate? Why?
- What’s your personal opinion about nuclear energy? Why?
Rising Inequality
What is inequality? This:
Credit Suisse numbers released in October 2010 show that the richest 0.5 percent of global adults hold well over a third of the world’s wealth. – See more at: http://inequality.org/global-inequality/#sthash.mMH7d4NB.dpuf
Source: Credit Suisse Research Institute Continue reading
Successful Feature Articles
CEFR-J Writing B2.1 Goal:
“I can write reasonably coherent essays and reports using a wide range of vocabulary and complex sentence structures, synthesizing information and arguments from a number of sources, provided I know something about the topics.”
What I am looking for is…
- an interesting local story,
- told from a thoughtful angle,
- using good quotes & paraphrasing,
- and multiple sources of information.
Subtitles
From: “Rethinking the Art of Subtitles” by Grant Rosenburg, Time
If subtitles “aren’t invisible, you fail,” says Henri Béhar, subtitler of notable films such as Brokeback Mountain, Boyz in the Hood and Good Will Hunting. “The titles should subtly give people the impression that they are understanding the characters speaking, not reading words on the screen.” Trying to translate one language to another in the course of a film has challenges and limitations that apply to dubbing as well as subtitling — unlike literature which has the safety net of footnotes, film subtitlers have to make it work in the moment, all while trying to adapt wordplay and cultural references.
Once in a while, subtitlers do get their due. Jacqueline Cohen, responsible for all of Woody Allen’s films since 1989’s Alice, says that “whenever Woody comes to town, he always mentions that the reason his films are so successful in France is thanks to the person who does the subtitles.” No quick task, considering the talky nature of the prolific filmmaker’s almost annual releases. “Action movies average about 700 subtitles — Woody’s, between 1,500 to 2,000,” says Claude Dupuy, the director of subtitling at LVT Laser Subtitling, which handles more than 600 films per year.
At LVT and other companies, a person watches the film scene by scene, doing what’s known as spotting — marking time according to the timecode, the film’s official clock — the start and end point of each spoken line of dialogue. Then the subtitler goes to work, balancing the challenge of conveying meaning accurately within the confines of space and the roughly 1.5-second-long display allotted per subtitle. The reality is that despite the reputation of subtitling over dubbing as a form of cultural purity, the eye reads slower than the ear hears, meaning that more than a third of a film’s dialogue is sacrificed for what is most essential. The general rule is no more than 45 characters per line, even though widescreen movies could fit longer sentences (says Dupuy, “it shouldn’t be like watching tennis”).
There are logical rules as well, such as finishing a subtitle when a character stops speaking and not extending it over a cut, which can be disorienting. Good subtitles work with the rhythm of the scene, based on accurate spotting that captures that timing.

